Writing Standards Portfolio: Parent Post

1. What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why? 

The querencia essay, because it shows your experience and pulls me into the story.

1. What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?

The website is nice, but you could be more prepared.

1. Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?

Voice

1. Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?

Organziation

Parent: Alton Kurosawa

Link to Portfolio: http://www.wix.com/jjkurosawa/joyswritingstandardsportfolio