Achievements that I am proud of from this past semester include: sentence fluency assessments, risky business essay, Coming of Age essay, and the College essay. Although I did do well on the majority of these assignments or tests, I could have improved them.
I am most proud of my Coming of Age Essay and College Essay because of the grade I recieved on them (4) and the fact that I understood what I was doing, could follow the criteria, did my best on them, and actually pulled off the grade.
A major challenge I had this semester would definately be time management and balance. I delt with them by making sure I payed attention in class, and writing due dates down.
Goals I have for next semester is to make better plans when it comes to group work, make sure I am able to contribute to a group, and to prioritize my different projects early on.
I think these are realistic goals because they are more specific than just wanting to stop putting assignments off, and because it is what I need to work on in order to have
bettered my grade this past semester, and what will help me later on.
To view my portfolio, please go here----> http://jjkurosawa.wix.com/joy2ndqportfolio
After you have viewd my portfolio answer the questions below in a comment:
After you have viewd my portfolio answer the questions below in a comment:
- What piece of writing did you like best in my portfolio and why?
- What did you like about my portfolio and sharing and what would you like to see me improve on?
- Which of the writing traits (ideas, organization, voice, word choice) do you feel was most successful for me?
- Which of the traits of writing would you like me to improve on in the coming semester?
Hi joy:)
ReplyDelete1. College Essay, because I got to learn more about you that I didn't know
2. I liked the design or layout
You can improve on your grammar!
3. Voice
4.Organization